The Better To See You by Kate SeRine

Like I mentioned last week, I was able to predict who the focus of the next book in the Transplanted Tales series would be due to more page time for a certain character. The cover of The Better To See You also kind of gives it away, and the title itself clues you into its biggest supporting character. 

Lavender Seely, former fairy godmother to Cinderella, has been sober for a year. Getting sober has been great for her mental health, but not for her magic. An accident she caused due to a burst of faulty magic results in her needing to leave Chicago and find a safe haven until things calm down. Red sends her across the country to a remote community of tales, characters who have chosen to live amongst themselves, free of humans, where they can also mostly govern themselves. In this village, Lavender should be far enough away that the death threats promised by the victim of her uncontrolled magical burst should go unfulfilled. However, Lavender doesn’t even make it to the destination Red relayed to her before she gets into trouble. 

This is a passionate story of two individuals who have had a very rough life since coming over. They have both suffered immensely, but in vastly different ways. It seems that the old saying misery loves company rings true here, as these two sad souls find solace in each other. I don’t want to say anything else, you will just have to read and see for yourself. I really enjoyed the pairing in this story, I wasn’t expecting it, but it works surprisingly well.

Grimm Consequences by Kate SeRine

Even though I am an old school paper and ink book reader, I did enjoy reading this digital only novella in the Transplanted Tales series. It’s very short, I think I got through the entire story in less than two hours, but I was dying to read more of Red and Grimm and this satisfied the need.

This tale begins two months after the conclusion of Red, and things seem to be going well for the law enforcement officers. There is something hanging over Nate’s head, however, and it is not the fact that there has been no trace of Dracula since he disappeared, plus, combine that with the still missing corpse of the mysterious witch. Nate committed a serious crime in the world of Reapers and he has been waiting to see what his punishment will be and wondering when exactly they will be coming for him. The stubborn Tess Little notices that Nate has not been himself lately, and even though he tries to warn her off she insists on being involved.

I loved getting more background information on Nate, he has an evil origin story and centuries of history making up who he is and how he got to where he is now. It’s incredible that he turned out to be such a decent person. Grimm Consequences is also a great bridge between Red and the next book in the series, The Better To See You, because I was able to predict who the focus of the next novel would be and it fit in really nicely in terms of the flow of the story. I will actually be posting my review of that story next week, so if you are ready for more, come back and read my thoughts on it. 

Red by Kate SeRine

I have been looking forward to reading the Transplanted Tales series for a very long time. I finally collected all the physical books, and downloaded the one tale that is digital only, and felt prepared to begin. 

All your favorite fairy tale characters have been taken out of the fantasy worlds they live in and have been forced to live amongst ordinary, mortal humans in the real world. It all started when a few magical beings were messing around, causing a spell to go wrong. The Little Red Riding Hood we grew up reading about is now Enforcement Officer Tess “Red” Little working for the Chicago branch of the Fairytale Management Authority. She is all grown up, and is as tough as the leather jacket and combat boots she wears make her look. The story begins with Red trying to bring in a tale that was breaking his parole, nothing she hadn’t done before. After things don’t go as planned, her bad night becomes even worse when she is put on a new case. A few tales have been murdered recently, and the top three suspects all happen to be former lovers of Red. Even though she considers investigating her former flames to be a conflict of interest, her temporary partner, Nate Grimm, believes her connection to the suspects is exactly what will lead them to getting the answers they are looking for. They are strapped for time, as there are more attacks and murders happening by the day, and it takes a physical and mental toll on everyone involved.

I loved that the characters in this book didn’t consist of only the very well known fairy tales that nearly everyone knows of, such as Cinderella. There were also characters from classic literature and Medieval legends and other children’s stories. It made the story all the more interesting to have some less well known fictional characters, like throwing in a mention about a random sailor from Moby Dick for instance. This was an amazing thriller style mystery, with just the right amount of magic and romance. Yes, it does get a little spicy. It was very mild compared to what I usually get into, but I cannot fault it at all due to how great the story was. I cannot tell you how much I am looking forward to reading the next tale in this series, of which Detective Grimm seems to be the main character. I am very much going to enjoy seeing more of him and you can see what I have to say about Grimm Consequences next week. 

The Pool Boy by Nikki Sloane

I have been so engrossed in all the thrillers I have been consumed with lately that when I picked up this book I thought I was grabbing another one. I think it was the dark colors, and the indifferent look on the pool boy’s face on the cover that had me thinking that the head line “you are going to get wet” meant wet with blood. As an avid spicy book reader, I should have known better. I never felt so naive and clueless as when I got to the first intimate scene in this book, which started at chapter four, which is when I realized that this was actually a spicy romance novel and not a murder mystery involving an attractive serial killing pool boy. Does anyone know of a book with this plot? If you do, let me know, I think I would be into it.

So finding out that I was reading a romance novel after expecting a thriller was my first surprise. My second was finding out that this was actually the second book in a three book series, titled the Nashville Neighborhood. The first book is called The Doctor, and the one following this one is called The Architect. After reading this story I think I can guess who the first book focuses on after meeting some of the side characters, but I don’t have an idea who the third book might be about. I am mildly interested in reading the other two stories. 

I can see myself enjoying the other two books in the Nashville Neighborhood series because I did enjoy this one. There was betrayal, conflict, desire, great spice, and a good story to go along with it. It was not all spice, I did not get to use up that many post its when I was marking the juicy scenes, there was actually a plot. So while the tropes are cliche, the attractive older woman hooking up with a young man trope and the pool boy trope, the rest of the story has you wanting to read past the intimacy. I found myself constantly rooting for Troy, our young man of many talents, as he takes risks with his love life, family, and career. I also greatly admired Erika, the leading lady, as she used her connections to help out the young man she finds herself having an unexpected, hot affair with. The two of them are really great together and they are great for each other. 

Her Seduction by Felix Alexander

This is closer to the length of a novella or a short story than a book, it took me about ninety minutes to read the entire thing, hence posting this review for Short Story Saturday. Much like the review from last Saturday, I also found this Voracious download to be a disappointment. You can find the author on Amazon if you are interested, and you can get his stories on Kindle. I, however, would not be tempted to make the purchase of any of his stories after having read this one. 

After I finished this story and started doing my research for the blog, I found out that this novella is book three in a four part collection. I do not believe any of the stories have anything to do with each other, so you can start with any one and go from there if you so choose. Moving away from that, my first problem with this novella was that the story was kind of spoiled in the first few pages. It started off with the female and male characters reminiscing on where they were before they met each other, and then went to the present in which they state what happened after they began their affair. So the introduction skips over the entire bulk of the plot in which they meet each other, seduce and get seduced, and pursue a casual but intense relationship, while shoving the end of the tale right into your face. It’s like, what is the point of even reading the story if the author is giving you the end at the very beginning. 

Secondly, I had a real problem with the tense in this story, it was kind of all over the place. Some parts were written in present tense, some in past tense, and it didn’t flow well. I think I am remembering this correctly from way back in my elementary and middle school days, but when you are writing a story it is very important to keep everything in the correct tense. Others may not notice it, but I absolutely did. I am not sure if this is because I read a lot or because I am just a stickler for the rules or writing, but it was glaringly obvious to me that the tenses were not what they should be. I am not saying that my writing is perfect, although I do try to keep everything I compose in the correct tense and have a nice flow, but I am saying that I expect more from a professional writer regardless of whether or not they have professional editors assisting them. There are plenty of programs out there that can help a writer with these sorts of things and they should be implemented. 

So those two things really bothered me. It took away from my ability to try and enjoy the story. It was ok as far as spice goes, there were some decent scenes. I wouldn’t read it again, but I can see it as something moms with exhausting children and a disappointing husband mighty enjoy. That is probably one of the most brutal things I have ever written here but I am not going to feel sorry about it. I am actually holding back my laughter as I write this. It feels good to be a little evil sometimes. 

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